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Kevin Hart Needs a Better Line

  • Writer: ssharrer
    ssharrer
  • Feb 28, 2021
  • 1 min read

Updated: Feb 28, 2021

Kevin Hart has a popular commercial for the Chase Freedom Visa card where he tells his neighbors about what they can save. In our opinion, this could be much better with a decent closing iine. Kevin yells to his neighbors and is asked by his the neighbor next to him why he is yelling, since his neighbor is standing a few feet away from him. He simply says, "Because that's what I do!" That's a weak line begging for a good one, especially from such a funny guy. For example, how about something like, "Because you haven't used your card!" or "You're listening too loud!" or something other than what he got. The neighbor could say, "Hey, you're a little loud." and Kevin could respond "Hey, what I'm wearing doesn't matter." Something. A good closing line would leave a much better feeling about the Chase card than what you get. This is, of course, a JuMyOp (Just My Opinion).

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